英语作文之低碳生活

Low carbon life 低碳生活

构思点拨

图片中一个小男孩，早已进入甜蜜的梦乡，电视却依然在播放，这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视，还责备他为什么总是忘记关电视。显然，直观看来，这幅图是在告诉我们要节约用电。但是，我们如果从更宏观，更深层次的角度去思考，这幅图正是在告诉我们一个流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡导一种低碳环保的生活方式。因此本文的内容和结构可如下：

第一段：描述图画；第二段：列举现象，分析影响；第三段：建议措施，展望未来。

思维拓展

环保话题，例如节约能源、拼车、交通问题等图片都可以与低碳生活的理念相联系，从低碳的角度入手展开写作。

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②.

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life. Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month.

To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature.

佳作妙译

如上图生动地展示，一个小男孩正在沙发上舒适地睡觉，电视还开着。这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视，责怪小男孩又忘了关电视。

这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。很多人习惯于做什么事情都开着电视，实际上并不看。这种习惯会导致电力和能源的浪费，这会导致碳排放。这偏离了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，减少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保护环境，实现可持续发展。根据统计数据，如果我们每天把开电视的时间减少一小时，则每个月可以减少4. 17千克的碳排放量。

作为对地球负责任的管理者，我们必须在公众中推广并普及低碳的生活方式，从日常生活中的每个细节开始。我们必须要改变为了获得短期的快速经济发展，牺牲长期的环境健康的做法，转向发展绿色经济、循环经济以及低碳经济。所有这些有效的措施可以帮助我们实现社会发展与自然有序发展之间的和谐。

名师点评

① is sleeping soundly： 熟睡，也可以表达为 A boy is fast asleep.“soundly and comfortably”这类副词的加入，使得描述更生动活泼，而不是单调的主谓宾。

② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa， with the television on， when his mother comes and turns off the television for him， blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again.

该句主干结构是：A boy is sleeping， when his mother comes and turns off the television.

这个句型的含义是：一件事情正在发生（正在睡觉），突然发生了另一件事（妈妈来关电视）。

“with the television on”： with 引导的伴随结构，即A boy is sleeping， while the television is on. 也可以写成伴随状语A boy is sleeping， forgetting to turn off the television.

“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，这句是妈妈关电视的伴随动作，一边关电视，一边责怪孩子忘记关电视。

图画描述这句，写得越精彩越好，这句是先入为主的句子，也是阅卷老师重点看的句子。

③ are used to doing： 习惯于做某事，使用短语表达，地道准确。

④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet：这是2005年真题阅读中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的标准到位。

一般而言，环保类话题，都可以用这句话，引出第三段的个人评论。

中国人饮食的改变 Changes in Peoples Diet in China

The period of 1986 1990 saw great changes in the diet of the Chinese. Grain, which used to be the main food of most people in China, is now playing a less important role. On the other hand, the meat and fish has increased rapidly. The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. First, people are much wealthier than before. With higher income,they can afford to buy good foods. Another factor is that people have realized the importance of a balanced diet to their health. Lack of certain amount of meat or milk,for example, will result in poor health. Finally, owing to the eeonomic reform, meat, chicken, fish and milk, which were scarce in the past, are produced in large quantities. For all these reasons, what was formerly called the basket of vegetables has. To sum up, insignificant as those changes may seem, they are the signs of the improved economic condition in China. We believe that as long as the effort continuous in reform and opening to the outside world, there will be greater changes in people's diet in the future.

在人民在中国饮食变化

内容：在人们的饮食变化China1.1986 - 1990年期间中国人饮食的巨大变化。2。饮食变化的原因。3。总之... ...在1986-1990年期间，看到了中国饮食的巨大变化。粮食，这曾是在中国大多数人的主要食物，而现在，同样重要的作用。另一方面，肉和鱼的迅速增加。饮食习惯的变化，可以比重由许多因素。首先，人们比以前更富有。由于收入较高，他们可以买得起的食品。另一个因素是，人们已经认识到均衡饮食的重要性，对他们的健康。缺乏对肉类或奶类一定数额，例如，会导致健康不佳。最后，由于eeonomic改革，肉，鸡，鱼和牛奶，这已是过去稀少，是大批量生产。由于所有这些原因，是原称为 蔬菜篮子 的。总括来说，无关紧要，这些变化看起来，他们是在中国改善经济状况的迹象。我们相信，只要不断努力，改革开放和对外开放，将在人们的饮食习惯，今后更大的变化。

About Wenchuan earthquake 关于汶川大地震

Wenchuan, a small city, was destroyed by the earthquake. Many people were buried underground. Many houses were collapsed.

The army comes to help people save some people who were buried underground. People said thanks to them.

The force of the earthquake is very big. But people don't afraid it. People around the world contributed money to Wenchuan. We wish Wenchuan will become more and more beautiful.

What an unbelievable thing it is! Their great spirits showed the powerful life vitality of humans! However, they must keep fighting against the death schools were destroyed and there were many students and teachers who left us forever. Sadness, hopelessness and different kinds of danger spreaded out here and there!

But ,fortunately ,love is around us :the Communist party helps us ,the army helps us ,the people all over the world help us offer us with money ,goods, love and so on !For example ,li Lian ji, a warm-hearted man ,offered us with 20 million yuan !

With the help of the such a large love, we will over come the damage of the earthquake and face our beautiful future!

汶川，一个小城市，被地震毁了。很多人被埋在地下。许多房子倒塌了。军队来帮助人们节省一些人埋在地下。人们对他们说谢谢。地震的力量是非常大的。但人们并不害怕它。世界各地的人们为汶川捐款。我们希望汶川会越来越漂亮。这是一个不可思议的事情！他们的伟大精神，显示了强大的生命活力的人！然而，他们必须继续战斗反对死刑。很多学校被摧毁，有许多学生和老师谁永远离开了我们。悲伤，绝望和不同种类的危险分散在这里和那里！但是，幸运的是，爱是在我们周围：共产党帮助我们，帮助我们的军队，全世界的人都帮助我们。他们为我们提供了用金钱，货物，爱情等等！例如，李莲姬，一个热心的人，给我们提供了20000000元人民币！在这样大爱的帮助下，我们将在今后的地震破坏和面对我们的美好未来！

世界森林日The World Forest Day

In 1971, the Spanish naturalists suggested that we should set up a day to call on people to protect the forest and make the full use of it. Then the representatives of the naturalists from all over the world decided that March 21 is the world forest day. In some countries, this day is also deemed as the tree-planting day. After 4 decades, the world forest day is more than a day to call on people to protect the forest, making people realize the relations between human being and the forest is also the aim of the forest day.

在1971年，西班牙的自然学家提出人们应该设立一个节日来号召民众保护森林，并尽其所用。然后来自世界各地的自然学家的.代表们决定把每年的3月21日定为世界森林日。在某些国家，这一天也被认定为是植树节。40年过去了，世界森林日也不仅仅是号召大家保护森林的节日，它也是帮助人们意识到人类与森林关系的节日。

It’s generally accepted that the forest has the functions of cooling off the global temperature, refreshing the air, preserving soil and water, protecting the nature links and so on. The forest is also the key to solve the severe environmental problems. In American Indian’s cultural, the local people believe that the forest raise up the sky. If the forest disappears, the sky will collapse, and the living beings would die out. With the rapid development of human society, the forest coverage rate is decrease. While the demands of the woods and papers products keep increasing. It can hardly meet the needs of human beings. Everyday, countless trees are cutting down to make various paper products. In order to make more money, people destroy the forests, and there comes different kinds of problems. For instance, soil erosion, global warming, glaciers melting, and sea level rising. The forest is so important to this planet. We should do something to protect the forest.

人们普遍认为森林具有降温、净化空气、保护水土和维持自然链等功能。森林也是解决严峻环境问题的关键。在美洲的印第安人文化中，当地人认为树木撑起了天空，如果森林消失，那么天空就会塌陷，世界上的生物就会随之灭亡。随着人类社会的快速发展，森林覆盖率在逐渐下降。而人们对木材及纸制品的需求量日益增长，所砍伐的树木难以满足人们的需求。每一天，不计其数的树木被做成各种各样的纸制品。为了赚更多的钱，人们摧毁了森林，然而问题也随之而来。例如：水土流失、气候变暖、冰川融化、海平面上升等等。森林对我们的地球来说如此的重要，我们应该好好保护它。

First, stop cutting down the forest blindly. If we really have to, plant more trees. Second, the government should do something to enhance the people’s awareness of forest protection. Last but not least, we can reduce the use of paper, such as avoid using disposable paper goods. Protect the forest is to protect ourselves. Without the forest, we can not live on the earth either.

首先，我们要停止盲目的砍伐森林。如果不得不这样做，那就种植更多的树木。其次，政府宣传森林的重要性，以此提高普通民众保护森林的意识。最后，我们应该减少纸质用品，例如避免使用一次性的纸制品。保护森林就是保护我们自己。没有了森林，我们也不能存活在地球之上。

经济全球化对世界的影响The impact of economic globalization on the world

Economic globalization benefits the world immensely, especially the prosperity of tourism. As a result,the cultures, languages and customs in the minorities are notmysterious to the world any more, which should be attributed to thepopularity of tourism. It is a consensus that tourism canstimulate the economic development in a region, since tourism playsan important role in the acceleration of the improvement ofservice, such as transportation, accommodation, catering and othermarginal business. With a view to attracting more tourists, theminority regions have to consider how to improve their image andservice, during the course of which they can have an overall planto promote the status of their region. Nowadays, many people travelfor minority regions to satisfy their curiosity, where they canhave unexpected findings. Furthermore, tourism can strengthenthe interflow of cultures and traditions between the people indifferent regions. Trips to minority countries and regions renderpeople a lot of new cultures and customs, which, presumably, havebeen handed down from old ages and enjoyed very splendid erly, people can only get some segments about the minoritiesfrom videos, films and other incomplete descriptions on books. Now,tourists have more opportunities to communicate or even live withthe minority people and acquire first-hand knowledge about them,which provides the researchers with a lot of authentic information. Admittedly, tourism damages thenatural environment in some minority regions and spoils thepeaceful life of them to some degree due to their frequentactivities in the minority regions, the environment beingdeteriorated in some regions, which is not what we expected. Generally, the popularity of Englishand tourism brings more advantages than damage to the minorityregions, since it has enriched people’s knowledge and widened theirhorizons. But meanwhile, we should be on the alert for the damageto the minority regions and take effective means to tackle theproblems tourism arouses.

经济全球化对世界的好处，特别是旅游业的繁荣。因此，文化，在少数民族语言和风俗习惯是神秘的世界，这要归功于大众化旅游。这是一个共识，旅游能够促进一个地区经济的发展起着重要的作用，因为旅游业在改善服务的加速度，如交通，住宿，餐饮和othermarginal业务。为了吸引更多的游客，民族地区必须考虑如何提高自己的形象和服务，在教学过程中他们能有一个全面的计划来促进他们的区域中的地位。如今，许多人travelfor民族地区来满足他们的好奇心，他们在那里会有意外的发现。此外，旅游可以加强人们之间的交流，不同区域的文化和传统。旅行对少数国家和地区renderpeople很多新的文化和风俗，这，大概，是从旧时代流传下来的、非常辉煌的历史。以前，人们只能得到关于minoritiesfrom视频段，在书籍、电影和其他不完整的描述。现在，旅游者有更多的交流机会，甚至可以与少数民族进行交流，并获得他们的第一手知识，这为研究者提供了很多真实的信息。诚然，在一些少数民族地区旅游的损害会和平生活的他们在少数民族地区由于其frequentactivities一定程度的自然环境，环境beingdeteriorated在一些地区，这不是我们所期望的。一般来说，英语，旅游的普及带来的损害比地区更具有优势，因为它丰富了人们的知识，拓宽了视野。但同时，我们必须对对少数民族地区采取解决问题的有效手段，旅游引起警惕。

生态环境 the balance of nature